Hey Arden, i really liked your story it was good. One thing that i liked a lot is how it transition from Dakota being popular and what not to this new kid named Hawk who became cooler at the end. At first i was questioning myself thinking is Dakota a really cool name for a guy? Or does it even suit well for a guy in general? Thinking that he would of been the main protagonist throughout the whole story got me thinking on how would it end? But the ending answered all my questions.
But in terms of coolness Hawk it totally better then Dakota to be honest Dakota is to feminine but Hawk is just kick ass lol. Also some cool archetypes would be badass or class clown or somebody down to earth and mad chill which i think Hawk falls under.
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