Hey Max I like the outline of it so far it sounds like it could be a really good paper. I really like the evidence that you have so far about the game companies making money because of us kids buying them. But I'm also hoping that you also have evidence for all the rest of your arguments, because so far im liking the whole outline and such, but if you don't have any good evidence to back up your paper it would be a pretty "okay" paper. But i have confidence in you so work your hardest and you'll have a great paper.
Good luck, Richie S.
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